Talk:Asuma Sarutobi

Part II, Anyone?
There is no reference to part II of the manga, and hence, his death is entirely cut from the article. Sasuke9031 01:14, 3 November 2007 (UTC)


 * He was killed. I don't have the time to look for it myself, but you are welcome to do so. Its pretty much the Hidan and Kakuzu arc, chapters 320 to 329. Find them, read them. Its there.--TheUltimate3 01:29, 3 November 2007 (UTC)

Cleanup
This article needs a bit of cleanup:
 * There is no section on Asuma's Background, History, Abilities, and such... and is instead all collected inside of a Part In The Story which is actually supposed to be written as Part in the Story and used to encompass the characters participation in the story arcs.
 * The Revelations section is written in present tense and goes into to much detail on past speculation instead of just inserting the important stuff (ie: Asuma Sarutobi is the Third Hokage's son) into relevant parts of the article.
 * The "Asuma's trench knives" section is similarly written in a poor quality. This kind of thing is supposed to be part of an Abilities section.
 * The "Asuma's legacy on Team 10" should be part of a history section or part of a arc section in the Part II section of what should be Part in the Story.
 * ~ NOTASTAFF Daniel Friesen (DanTMan, Nadir Seen Fire) (talk) current discussion Jan 27, 2008 @ 03:01 (UTC)