User talk:70.126.126.63

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Sage Mode article
Uhm, the information you're adding to the Sage Mode article (especially regarding the snake Sage Mode) is either uncorroborated or wrong. I'll address them here: With that I'd ask you to stop padding the article with either general information or transferring info from toad Sage Mode and applying it there. We're supposed to record what has happened, not assumptions.--Cerez 365 ™(talk) 20:48, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
 * I removed the bits about them gaining animal-like features of those they learned from and the "common feature bit" because it's unnecessary due to being mentioned already elsewhere in the article.
 * Where did you get your information from regarding the eye colour of persons in snake sage mode because i've yet to see that anywhere
 * It was also never said that Orochimaru couldn't use Sage Mode/Senjutsu entirely but that because of his host bodies, he was unable to. If he was unable I dare say he'd have used the cursed seal on himself
 * A parody of what? What happens to his followers is all Jūgo's Clan stuff not Sage Mode. You're mixing up the two. Jūgo's clan utilises natural energy, but aren't Sages.

To explain, through Orochimaru's white snake senjutsu infused within the Curse Marks, the Sound Five and Sasuke are "white snake Sage Mode parodies" (all having yellow eyes). As Jugo's clan their bloodline is linked to white snake Senjutsu (also having yellow eyes) yet are unable to assume Sage Mode.70.126.126.63 (talk) 01:30, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Shortening of sections
While I appreciate the shortening of sections, sometimes you make weird sentences. For example, you tend to use "with" in places where it looks rather awkward, and in changing some sentences, you make them grammatically incorrect, for example, in Tsunade's article, your edit made this sentence: "Tsunade began issuing orders for the village's defense, placing extra protection around those still working on Pain's secret while Katsuyu divide and seek out every villager so that she could protect and heal them remotely", the Katsuyu part was a different sentence before you changed it, but you didn't change the tense, making the sentence weird, a bit further you also created an incorrect "nothing more but", where the correct would be "nothing more than". I don't oppose you editing the pages, but please pay more attention to what you change and how you do so. Also, this wiki uses UK English, not US English, you change the spelling of some words from UK to US. Omnibender - Talk - Contributions 00:15, August 16, 2012 (UTC)