User talk:Gemnist

Naruto vs. Gaara
Hey Gemnist, I changed my user name from Eric (which was a stupid name for me to choose anyway) to Lord 7th Hokage. Anyway I just wanted to find out if there is any progress on the Naruto vs. Gaara fightLord 7th Hokage (talk) 18:34, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Well done Gemnist, truly well done! Let's quickly go for the nit picks. Chapter 127, no flaws. Chapter 128. I really don't think Gaara gives a crap about wining the quarterfinals. Instead, why don't you have Gaara thinking about how Guy saved Lee and have Gaara say "who's going to save you?!" Then pop up Naruto and Sakura and have them say "We'll save him!". Chapter 129, I don't think the term 'tailed beast' was introduced. They are just known as monsters. Naruto doesn't even know there are more tailed beasts 1-9. And Gaara can't manipulate his tailed beast. Everything is good but leading up to chapter 134. Naruto doesn't really talk about him about their life's as jinchuriki, but rather them just being lonely and hated. Everything else, I have no complaints.Lord 7th Hokage (talk) 00:22, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

intros cont'd
Three users have told you to stop adding more to intros. For the last time, intros are meant to be simple summaries of the character. Constantly adding links can be possible spoiler information, not to mention that those links you add can literally be found by scrolling down the page, making them redundant. Please stop. I will not warn again. -- WindStar7125 (talk | contribs) 03:27, January 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Also, please do not make edits such as this. That never happened in the original Naruto series, for Obito Uchiha was not revealed at that time. Please do not put links to events that happened Post-Part I in Part I summaries. Again, the main reason is spoilers. I do not want to take decisive action on you, because I understand you have good intentions and want to help, but please listen to what we are telling you. -- WindStar7125 (talk | contribs) 03:52, January 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Couldn't agree more with Windy and please refrain yourself from including heavy spoilers in the summary. --Sarutobii2 (talk) 04:06, January 15, 2015 (UTC)
 * Also, in regards to Asuma's and Kurenai's infoboxes... Cerez365 changed their relationship to "Husband and Wife" rather than "Lovers" in order to maintain consistency. I changed your revision back to Cerez's one, as Databook Retsu no Sho referred to Kurenai as "Kurenai Sarutobi," making the husband-wife relation valid and again, in order to thin down inconsistency in infoboxes. -- WindStar7125 (talk | contribs) 04:34, January 15, 2015 (UTC)

re: Star Wars
Pure bullshit. They wiped out 20 years and upwards of several thousand years of in universe lore so they wouldn't have problems with the Star Wars trilogy. Cause titans help them make the sequel trilogy take place so far ahead that they didn't need to get Ford, Fisher and Hamill to get the nostalgia fanboys to come running. That being said I am over it and have watching and waiting with optimism that the new expanded universe is any good. So far I have been disappointed, as everything that has been coming out has been set in between 3 and 4 and not after 6 like I want.--TheUltimate3 (talk) 00:51, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * Can't be. The timeline for the Sequel Trilogy is roughly 30-40 years, given the age of the original cast. During that time in the Old EU, the New Republic rose and fell into the Galactic Alliance, the Yuuzhan Vong reduced much of the galaxy into a wasteland, Chewbacca is dead and there is at least a full new generation of Jedi. This trilogy, none of that happened, so it is highly unlikely they shelved it just to use it in the movies. The sad reality is that they most likely got rid of it because they wanted a chance to use the old cast again and they couldn't with the EU breathing down their necks.--TheUltimate3 Eye of Rikudō.svg (talk) 12:07, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Your take
As you know from our discussion on the overview, I value your opinion very highly. Therefore, would you mind giving this a read, and then letting me know your thoughts on the matter? Thanks! :D --KirinNOTKarin98 (talk) 03:49, January 20, 2015 (UTC)
 * I'll read your Sasuke script tomorrow and get back to you ASAP! :D --KirinNOTKarin98 (talk) 03:07, January 21, 2015 (UTC)
 * Read your script- fortunately, or unfortunately, I don't have that much to say. It's pretty similar to the manga, with a few added lines of dialogue that make the scene better. There's also a few more scenes that screw with the pairings, as it's obvious your film will end with NaruSaku and SasuKarin (which isn't a problem- I don't care about pairings). Overall, I think it's a really good job! The only thing I have to mention is that adding all these new scenes of dialogue will make it even longer, and I'm still not sure how you plan on handling the length well enough so that it's not too long. Is there anything specifically you want my take on? --KirinNOTKarin98 (talk) 21:14, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Your script
Hey Gemnist! Yeah you can still call me Eric, I don't mind. Let's start with a few nit picks. I highly doubt an ANBU agent who is a skilled assassin can be knocked out cold with a hit with a forehead protector. He can certainly be deceived. But it's an embarrassment for him to be knocked out like that. Change it more to where he's delayed. Like Naruto's clone transformed himself into a leaf ninja who delivered paperwork that Kakashi didn't do and Yamato has to fill it out, a little comedy there. And I don't think Kiba knows Naruto acquired sage mode. And Kiba in this time would want Naruto to stay out of it because he has already too much spotlight and Kiba wants in on all the glory. And Sasuke doesn't know Karin is an Uzamaki. He learns that when he fights Kabuto. And Karin is more of a personal medic. She doesn't really tend to anyone else. And she's not much of a medic, Sasuke just bites her, I don't think she has much medical knowledge. And if Sasuke is going to say anything as he moves in for the kill, keep it silent. Don't make Sasuke say anything. Because saying "Die Villager", I don't know it seems improper. And the part where Sasuke says "Maybe I'll shut up", change it to "Only then can I stop!". And I'm sure Kakashi would stop Naruto from spilling the beans. Kakashi wanted to make sure only him, Naruto and Yamato knew, no one else. And I don't think Naruto would ever say he was afraid of Sasuke becoming Hokage. Oh I just read the footnote with Karin. Yeah add that in. Over all, well done ^_^Lord 7th Hokage (talk) 05:26, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

So Gemnist, what are the next chapters you are going to do? I don't really have any recommendations so I'll trust you.Lord 7th Hokage (talk) 05:13, January 21, 2015 (UTC)

Your Script
Hey, I read your work and the part you gave me. I would like to tell you that as it's fanon, it's a great attempt. Keep it up!--Hisana456 (talk) 08:12, January 21, 2015 (UTC)