Board Thread:Theories and Speculation/@comment-12509038-20150119062617/@comment-19730389-20150123032708

1)Hey Kirin, how about an idea where Kaguya's mother gave Kaguya herself the inspiration to nurture all around you. That's where she get her philosophy about earth being her nursery. And the way she dies is all up to you, her father killed her, or she died healing others. But I love what you did with Kazuki's name. I like what you did with the group being hesitate to accept her, why don't you add in a "test" of inanition? I think you should add more about how they found out the fruit existed. Like you could even say it's because of that piece of information that she was allowed in the group. Everything else is great and well done, but you should add how Kazuki didn't recognize her first with all of the changes. And if so, any survivor of this raid should spread the tale of her fate. You should add some dialogue between Kazuki and Kaguya where even Kazuki is noticing strange behavior. And for inspiration of her wanting to start the I.T, have it like some silly thing where Hamura asked for a bed time story and one thing leads to another or it can even lead up to a story like a mother bear has 2 Cubs. And one is in danger and she goes to rescue one. But she fails to notice that she left the other one unsheltered. Then Hamura asks Kaguya how can the mother protect the other cub if she's not there. Then she gets the idea that she needs to figure out a way to protect everyone and be there for everyone. That's why she gets the idea to use the I.T across the world. I like where you're going with your story. What about her being a tough loving mother who has no tolerance for treachery. That's where she can also get her demon name. Ohh I like what you did with the father's death. It shows she good with words and she's deceiving. You wrapped up her story great. But I think you made the Ten Tails a back seat kinda thing.