Board Thread:Naruto Discussions/@comment-31278419-20170331010234/@comment-3045936-20170522005645

I would do it to this. That Ninjas were ninjas, using stealth and shadows like traditional ones. However I would introduced the Sage of Six, as the second human with the ability to combine his physical energy with spiritual. He then taught other's this secret one being the original clans of ninjas. Thus adding a supernatural to their way of life.

As for the Sage. I would have made him great for three reasons.
 * Being born from his mother Kaguya, the first human with supernatural powers.
 * His training of physical energy, spiritual energy, and nature energy that gave him infinite Chakra like the innate power of his mother.
 * His eating of the God Tree Fruit.

The God Tree, would be a god from the heavens. It's fruit gives the ultimate Chakra energy Transcendence energy. Chakra energy not, physical, spiritual, or even nature the Chakra energy of Heaven. It allows one powers beyond the other three.

As for Dojutsu.
 * Sharingan: Not much I would change.
 * MS: I would state more details as to why, it leads to blindness. The MS once activated regardless immense Chakra to use. This requirement increases because the physical eye is burning out due to such power. Three methods to cure this and to lead to never gaining blindness. A). The canon method. B). Increased life-force from measures like Hashirama's cells or transplant to other host. C). Transcendence to a higher Dojutsu which increases the eye itself.
 * Rinnegan: Still not much difference.
 * Byakugan: Would have removed the blindspot under achievement conditions. If a Hyuga could absorb Chakra from another Hyuga and channel into their eyes, it would increase their eyes to see completely 360 degrees. However if one couldn't control this it would destroy their eyes. Also would have allowed the Byakugan the rare ability to manipulate chakra in other jutsu. By seeing the jutsu one could take over it's Chakra flow.

As for Chakra I would changed this. It's simply one or more energies, the two human innate that everyone has physical and spiriual. The external nature energy found from the world. And Transcendence the innate energy of otherworldly beings. It would be directly stated that the body is constantly producing it, at a slow rate to stay alive. Also other than gods, only those as Kaguya, her son, and Edo Tensei can have infinite chakra.

I have more things. But this some of the what I would change if I could.

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