Board Thread:Naruto Discussions/@comment-25922792-20141228212026

I've been working hard for over 3 or so days trying to finalize Karuna's article. I would like to know from the staff members as well as anyone else who gives "polite and mature" feedback to see what they think of Karuna so far.

Is there anyone I can improve on?

Are the techniques OK?

Does everything seems to fit in well?

Am I bending the canon too much?

These are only "example" that you're free to answer, but are just basic ideas I'd like to be noted on.

Thank you for reading! 