User talk:Laylo

Re: My edit on Naruto Uzumaki relationship
It came across as incredibly wordy. I could care less about NaruSaku or whatever it is called today, but I do take issue to things that are wordy just to make them sound larger than they were. A good point of reference is when a single chapter at most has only 1 thing happen, but people stretch them to fit at least half a paragraph. I don't like that.--TheUltimate3 (talk) 13:46, May 24, 2013 (UTC)

Okay I changed the wording of the edit. But it IS a major thing that Naruto sees her as an equal so please let it stay.


 * The look IS important. Just not the way you are making it. You are also writing in a way that shows that you are infact a fan of NaruSaku when the article is supposed to be completely neutral.
 * And in case this get's brought up I do want to note I do plan to go at that article with a nuke.--TheUltimate3 Allied Shinobi Forces Symbol.svg (talk) 14:04, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * And finally, mark your posts with -~ ,so that it's easier to respond to you.--TheUltimate3 Allied Shinobi Forces Symbol.svg (talk) 14:05, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * You're right. I don't like how that section looks either. As I said, I plan to nuke it when time permits. In fact my only contribution to that section in the last two or three months or so was the very last sentence and even then I stated it probably doesn't need to be there.--TheUltimate3 Allied Shinobi Forces Symbol.svg (talk) 15:05, May 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * We document everything that happens and we do. We do not however go into extreme and unnecessary detail unless we absolutely have to. The same knowledge of Naruto conveying he acknowledges Sakura's strength can be said with "Sakura pointing out she is their equal and Naruto agreeing" as opposed to "Sakura pointing out she is their equal and Naruto looking into her eyes and seeing her determination." One is long for almost no reason, the other is short and straight to the point.
 * That is the issue I have with your passage.--TheUltimate3 Allied Shinobi Forces Symbol.svg (talk) 16:57, May 24, 2013 (UTC)